'she is wrapped in cloud' ....such a lovely vision!i enjoyed your poem and am happy to find your blog!!stacy lynn marhttp://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
Sometimes in life too our vision is clouded
I think being wrapped in cloud can be too dark for me.. But I guess when reaching for the sky the clouds migh be there.
i wouldn't want to be in that space for sure but the images are strikingly beautiful..
I like how we can also read your poem metaphorically.
i think i have known her...tough times when even the pebbles seem as mountains and our vision is so obscured....
I love your beginning and ending with "she is wrapped in cloud" - and the pebble which blocks her path.
with one line you describe a state of mind perfectly.
What a wonderful image--lovely, lovely write!
Great imagery. It really does affect us that way.
Great repetition....and the idea of being unable to find her way around a pebble on a path (for it may as well be a mountain) reminds me so much of some of the thoughts in Robert Pirsig's book, "Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance." It is one of my favorites and so I am grateful for the reminder. Thanks :-)
Multiple layers of meaning contained within such simple and beautiful lines. The repetition of the line - "she is wrapped in could" - adds a great effect to the entire poem.
I think many of us would have thought of a person we knew like this.
Amazing title...Brilliant !!!